So, taking some feedback from you - I definitely read all the comments that come in, I've taken a bit of my spare non-online time to try tweaking these pics to improve legibility. Please let me know if these versions address the concerns that were expressed or if you'd prefer to see me go another way.
Note: due to limited technical abilities and programs onhand, all editing was done in powerpoint (although I did use a few fonts from blambot).
I know the editing work isn't exactly the work of a professional, but does it address the concerns expressed earlier or should I try working them a little differently? Again, please let me know.
Art by Oppaiman, story/dialog by Thrandrall.