Thursday, February 10, 2011

Showdown at Grave's Dam #12

The thrilling conclusion. 


Story by thrandrall, art by Mr-DNA.

Thanks for watching folks.  More discussion this weekend.  Will also update all labels as relevant.

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  2. I loved the transformation scenes alot but honestly it feels like the gender transformation was rendered completely useless by the trans species one. The impact of the last scene (effectively they were just killed off instead of having to suffer for their previous sins) made it seem like they got the easy way out instead of having then punished in an unique way.

    The story would have flowed better should the shotgun shells not been used or the bullet but not both.

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  3. Rubbish
    Hated it
    BOO!!!!!

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  4. Great comment anon. Perhaps it would mean more if you maybe went ahead and discussed why you didn't like it, and if tuT is too much trouble for you, you should probably avoid commenting all together. I thought the story was decent though maybe a little quick and the final result was a little bit of a let down. The artwork was great all together I liked it.

    ~666

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  5. I personally liked this story, i do believe that the tg transformation wasnt needed since they were immediately transformed into something else. But the quality of the work was fantastic and i cant wait for another story. :) Thanks again for this!!!

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  6. Like the other two. I agree with the ending as it was the tg transformation was not need. They should have stay half woman half animal. I still like it thou.

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  7. The art was great and the twist of them turning into a snake and scorpion was a surprise, but as mentioned before, both of them being turned into women was pointless if they became the snake and scorpion in the end. Unless it's meant to point out they are a female snake and scorpion now.

    There was still a good story here, but I'm not into animal transformations.

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  8. I had followed this with some anticipation, and I must say that this outcome did not surprise me at all. When I had first begun reading this, I thought they were to fully absorb the personas of the women they killed.

    The art was very nice, but I can not help but think what could have been...

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  9. I don't understand a few of the comments, yes if you're not a fan of animal transformations I can see why this may not suit your tastes, but seeing as this is the artist's choice then he has all the right to do it. Furthermore, I really don't see how the TG became irrelevant. The two are now a female snake and scorpion, and, as mentioned, are completely changed from when they arrived. So a TGTf fits the series and as always the art was beautiful.
    Okay done with my soapbox, jus want to say that I loved the series and the ending was fun twist :)

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  10. I really dig the artwork and overall theme. Great job you guys, you should definitely keep it up!

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  11. Awesome sequence. Thanks for commissioning it!

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